Feedback Wanted: Kevin and the Chook
Hi all Green Wizards,
I'd really appreciate all and any feedback for either of the two stories that I submitted. To date I have only written non fiction which gets published here and there about the place, but I have not written fiction work before, so obviously have a lot to learn about fiction writing and would appreciate some help.
I'll offer - if you'd like - to review anyone else's works upon request as long as they also critique one or both of my own stories. Please leave a comment on this thread if you would like this option. No stress, I'll be gentle in critiquing.
The stories can be found on the Internet here: