FEEDBACK WANTED: 'Naut
Alright, I'll start off the editing process by asking for critique of my story 'Naut.
What I'd like feedback on is 1)do the characters feel real enough? 2)is the setting clear, or are there elements that are confusing or missing? 3)is there any place that you are "pulled out" of the story by something? And anything else that you see that warrants feedback. Thanks!